Redo 60s explainer Video

Hi, I am attaching the video we did not like and want to completely redo. [login to view URL] The script is the same and is attached although we accept suggestions so that it improves the video. We need a new voice-over preferably with a male Neutral American English Accent. We don't like 2d character animated like the one we are redoing or has to be much better. We like motion graphics and whiteboard and other techniques combined harmoniously but used to convey our selling points. The main challenge is creating a beautiful and esthetic presentation which is hard since we have almost no prior work so it will need creativity. Our main problem with our previous video is that when showing design elements they were very bad and how they presented our logo was horrible. We don't want much writing on the screen since it will mostly be seen in smartphones and it is hard to read. We prefer to get it as fast as possible and unfortunately our budget is low. As an added incentive we will actually be offering explainer videos and related services so if we choose you for this job and we are satisfied with quality, service, and speed we will be coming directly to you for all other jobs we get new clients for.