Strengthen the letter to look more official and profissional (Half Page)

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The goal is to Strengthen the English in the attached letter to look more official and profissional.

Below is more details that might help you to understand the meaning of this letter:

- will be sent in the body of the email
-We are: Nima Arabia Company (Electrical Trading Company)
-Our supplier: Intercable (Manufacturing for tools for cable preparation)
-Enduser is : is Saudi Electricity Company (SEC)
-Celpack is our compitior

we have done a lot of demonstrations inferno of SEC people, and we worked a lot to qualify this product and get it Approved at SEC.

and in this email we want to tell our supplier that we have succeed. and the tool gets approved.

at the same time I want to tell that is all because of our effort