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  • AquimaWeb
    AquimaWeb
    • 6 anni fa

    Thank you for your comments and suggestions, i will start working right now.

    • 6 anni fa
  • andrewcjackson
    Titolare del Concorso
    • 6 anni fa

    I'm interested to hear your thoughts.

    • 6 anni fa
  • andrewcjackson
    Titolare del Concorso
    • 6 anni fa

    regarding my comment about lengthening the poster (height), the aspect ratio looks really good, so I don't want to ruin it, but it also needs to be readable. It's going to be a facebook post and the stream is pretty narrow.

    • 6 anni fa
  • andrewcjackson
    Titolare del Concorso
    • 6 anni fa

    8) Perhaps we need to change the aspect ration to make it longer so we can fit the text in but still make it readable
    9) WBA WORLD TITLE FIGHT - the FIGHT should also be bold
    10) Add "Applications close May 1st"
    11) It’s difficult to tell as it’s so small, but I don’t love the font you’ve used on the “Flying Tigers” logo. Do you have other suggestions? It looks like a serf font which clashes with the rest of the image
    12) as you’ve mentioned, I’d like to see some text effects, but I think they should be subtle as what you have now looks good.

    I hope these are all minor changes, but it looks fantastic and really stood out amongst the rest.

    • 6 anni fa
  • andrewcjackson
    Titolare del Concorso
    • 6 anni fa

    This is outstanding!! Far exceeds my expectations.
    Can you make a few minor changes and then I'll reward it to you. I realize some of these changes are because of my initial instructions, but seeing it brought to life highlights a few things:
    1) It's difficult to tell the Chinese flag is Chinese. Perhaps you can reverse it so you can see the stars
    2) The "Apply Now" is THE most important thing on the poster. Equal with "Marines Wanted”. This needs to be more obvious. Maybe a box (with rounded corners) around it? Just an idea. Or underlined?
    3) change the full stop after "Represent the corps" to a comma
    4) need larger space either side of "VS"
    5) "USA vs China" is important but can be made smaller is need be to accommodation "Apply Now", so can "Shanghai, July 2018"
    6) is that a comma between Shanghai and July 2018. It should be a comma.
    7) "vs" should be centered. It might be already, but just checking

    • 6 anni fa
  • AquimaWeb
    AquimaWeb
    • 6 anni fa

    I can add text effects if you need it, thanks.

    • 6 anni fa

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